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PostSubject: Time Machine Essay   Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:07 pm

Students,

Your first task is to finish reading the novel.

Remember this is an EID assignment.

You are welcome to send your first drafts (in paragraphs) to my personal email for review and comments from me.

Email: sbattelalima@yahoo.ca
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:33 pm

ok thank you miss sunny
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PostSubject: Thank You Also   Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:38 pm

Good Evening, every1,
Hi Sarah and Miss Batte. Yes thank you, miss (As Sarah said Very Happy Smile ). Your explanation in class was more than enough.
Best Wishes,
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:01 pm

hi miss batte,
great explination
i understood
Ill try to let nour stop bein bad
oh 1more thing
i chosed road no 1,
and bad thing we drived you crazy
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PostSubject: what should we do   Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:27 pm

hi miss batte
should we write in the essay a sammury or what do we think of the novel or what? Question Question Question
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Nov 28, 2009 1:07 pm

dear miss batte,
i do not understand
should we write a essay (which means the shortance of something?)
is this right... like we should shorten the story in paragraphs?
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PostSubject: Carefully Read the Essay Question   Sat Nov 28, 2009 3:33 pm

And use the organizer I gave you and posted on the Forum.

An essay is not a summary. You are answering the topic question using "evidence" from the story.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:34 am

ok so i write the essay by answering a question
and if thats right what i said scratch what just is the question? Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:02 am

mariam wrote:
ok so i write the essay by answering a question
and if thats right what i said scratch what just is the question? Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question

It is listed on the Forum. Kindly read carefully.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:04 am

ok
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:07 am

Ms.Batte wrote:
mariam wrote:
ok so i write the essay by answering a question
and if thats right what i said scratch what just is the question? Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question

It is listed on the Forum. Kindly read carefully.


We discussed it in class. The essay topic is listed on the forum.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:10 am

oka i saw it thnx miss batte
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:46 am

so miss we are going to solve these questions/ or complete these sentence?

ESSAY ORGANISER

INTRODUCTION:

Introductory Sentence: ___________________________________________

Summary of Theme: ___________________________________________

Link to Thesis: ___________________________________________

Thesis: ___________________________________________

Directional Statement: ___________________________________________

BODY PARAGRAPH #1

Topic Sentence: ________________________________________________







Conclusion: ________________________________________________

BODY PARAGRAPH #2

Topic Sentence: ________________________________________________







Conclusion: ________________________________________________



BODY PARAGRAPH #3

Topic Sentence: ________________________________________________







Conclusion: ________________________________________________

CONCLUSION

Restatement of Thesis: __________________________________________

Summary of Arg. #1: ___________________________________________

Summary of Arg. #2: ___________________________________________

Summary of Arg. #3: ___________________________________________

Broad, general conclusion: _________________________________________
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:48 am

if yes ... then i will do this emmediatly and send it to you
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:54 am

alia essam wrote:
if yes ... then i will do this emmediatly and send it to you


You find examples from the novel to prove each point. Then you use the essay organizer and type your points in paragraphs. This is your first draft. You need to submit your essay organizer along with your first and second drafts. Send your first draft to me so I can make suggestions.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:58 am

Ms.Batte wrote:
alia essam wrote:
if yes ... then i will do this emmediatly and send it to you


You find examples from the novel to prove each point. Then you use the essay organizer and type your points in paragraphs. This is your first draft. You need to submit your essay organizer along with your first and second drafts. Send your first draft to me so I can make suggestions.
so miss
that essay thing that i showed you... should i like:
answer everything in it and send it?
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PostSubject: Essay Organizer should be hand written   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:01 pm

Keep your organizer in your Time Machine file. I would like the first draft (in paragraphs) sent to me sbattelalima@yahoo.ca
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:10 pm

Ms.Batte wrote:
Keep your organizer in your Time Machine file. I would like the first draft (in paragraphs) sent to me sbattelalima@yahoo.ca
but miss ...
with no effence ...
i dont understand......
so i should send you the essay and answer the questions you have in the planner in paragraphs and then send it to you?
yes/no
f no ... why?
(dont get mad if my way of talking is not good .... i just want to finish it ... )
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:27 pm

me too i cant understand Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: hello   Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:56 pm

i think guys we should do the essay like talking about all the book like(authors,chapters etc..)
without any questions i think
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:04 pm

i think so scratch
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:33 pm

alia essam wrote:
Ms.Batte wrote:
Keep your organizer in your Time Machine file. I would like the first draft (in paragraphs) sent to me sbattelalima@yahoo.ca
but miss ...
with no effence ...
i dont understand......
so i should send you the essay and answer the questions you have in the planner in paragraphs and then send it to you?
yes/no
f no ... why?
(dont get mad if my way of talking is not good .... i just want to finish it ... )


Alia, use the planner to organize your essay. List your topic and concluding sentences and the quotes from the novel to prove the point you want to make. The planner is sort of like how we used the story board to plan your ending to IN the Dragons Claws. Good writing is planned and organized. Hope this helps
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:35 pm

abdelrahamn_amin wrote:
i think guys we should do the essay like talking about all the book like(authors,chapters etc..)
without any questions i think


The topic is posted on the Forum. Here it is again:

Assignment:

Your task is to write an essay on the following topic, or one of your own. If you choose to invent your own topic, make certain to check with me before beginning. Be sure to follow the tips outlined in “Writing in English”: brainstorm, complete the essay organizer, write a first draft, and keep all of your edited work in a separate file.

The late 19th century was a time when many people believed that progress, especially technological progress, could solve many of humanity's seemingly intractable problems, such as disease, hunger, violence, and exploitation. Wells, a devotee of science, seemingly endorses this view at the beginning of The Time Machine, as the Time Traveller, an inventor, creates a machine that travels in the fourth dimension. However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-not.” Using supporting evidence from the novel demonstrate this reality. Be sure to discuss the blurred line between good and evil (the Eloi and the Morlocks) as discussed in class.

Minimum length: 2 pages, single spaced, 11 pt. font. Include a bibliography

Remember to have introductory and concluding paragraphs and follow writing conventions.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:37 pm

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:51 pm

mariam wrote:
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Wink



Remember when we talked about how the Eloi are not entirely good? They are apathetic to improving their lives, content to scavenge for food, play and not improve their minds - in fact, their minds are similar to a 5 year old? Whereas, the Morlochs are not entirely bad? They hunt and work together and use their brains to build a world and society, albeit underground?

Human beings don't exist any more. Instead their two entirely opposite species. However, love of family, friends, the desire to learn and improve life is all but lost, however, the savage part of Human Nature continues.

You need to discuss this in your essay.
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