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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:13 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:13 pm

thnx miss batte

you made the essay more easy for me
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:23 pm

dear miss batte
i completed 100 posts what shall i do
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:27 pm

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abdelrahamn_amin wrote:
i think guys we should do the essay like talking about all the book like(authors,chapters etc..)
without any questions i think


The topic is posted on the Forum. Here it is again:

Assignment:

Your task is to write an essay on the following topic, or one of your own. If you choose to invent your own topic, make certain to check with me before beginning. Be sure to follow the tips outlined in “Writing in English”: brainstorm, complete the essay organizer, write a first draft, and keep all of your edited work in a separate file.

The late 19th century was a time when many people believed that progress, especially technological progress, could solve many of humanity's seemingly intractable problems, such as disease, hunger, violence, and exploitation. Wells, a devotee of science, seemingly endorses this view at the beginning of The Time Machine, as the Time Traveller, an inventor, creates a machine that travels in the fourth dimension. However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-not.” Using supporting evidence from the novel demonstrate this reality. Be sure to discuss the blurred line between good and evil (the Eloi and the Morlocks) as discussed in class.

Minimum length: 2 pages, single spaced, 11 pt. font. Include a bibliography

Remember to have introductory and concluding paragraphs and follow writing conventions.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:28 pm

but beware miss ...
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:29 pm

S O I HOPE it will be fine
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:54 pm

alia essam wrote:
i might have TONS OF problems


Follow the instructions and do the best that you can? Okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:58 am

Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face


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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:12 am

Everybody can you please stop posting at midnight? Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Get some sleep!!!!!!!!!!! Sleep Sleep Sleep
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PostSubject: I agree   Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:14 am

Yes, I agree with you, Mahmoud.
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PostSubject: hello   Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:53 am

what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do you guys post at midnight i didn't know you love posting that much.
but nobody post at midnight.
weirdoooo Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:09 pm

abdelrahman_elamawy wrote:
what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do you guys post at midnight i didn't know you love posting that much.
but nobody post at midnight.
weirdoooo Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect

btw .... u r posting in the midnight !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:34 pm

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Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face


Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:37 pm

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Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face



Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?
miss i have a question...
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:38 pm

what do you mean by BODY PARAGRAPH#1 , #2 , #3?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:41 pm

AND THE POIINTS
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:42 pm

and i need an example ( dont worry i wont copy it ... mabey you can do it on ... cinderella for an example)
BOIDY PARAGRAPH #1
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:53 pm

You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:57 pm

Thank you Ms. Batte,
This helped very much I
am relaxed now I was worriying about this
essay from the beggining of the
holiday now it is very easy with these points.

Thank You Again,
Ahmed study
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PostSubject: hello   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:00 pm

THNKS miss


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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:00 pm

Ahmed Youssuf wrote:
Thank you Ms. Batte,
This helped very much I
am relaxed now I was worriying about this
essay from the beggining of the
holiday now it is very easy with these points.

Thank You Again,
Ahmed study


You are welcome Ahmed.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:01 pm

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You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

Got it?
well ... im trtying ... what do you mean by:

"bad havenots"
"good haves"
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:10 pm

alia essam wrote:
Ms.Batte wrote:
You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

Got it?
well ... im trtying ... what do you mean by:

"bad havenots"
"good haves"


Generally we say "haves" - these are the people who have privilege of education, a good job, family, friends and money.

"have nots" are the poor, the uneducated who often have to resort to crime to survive. During H.G. Wells time, the gap between rich and poor, haves and have nots was great.

Often goodness is associated with having possessions and opportunites and evil associated with those who have nothing and have little opportunity to improve their lives. The Eloi do have some advantages over the Morlochs, while the Morlochs have some advantages over the Eloi. Thus neither one is entirely good or bad. They both possess these qualities. Find evidence in the novel to illustrate this point.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:20 pm

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