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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:38 pm

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No I am not posting at midnight Alia. I post the moment I wake up which is around 9 O'CLOCK IN THE MORNING Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes


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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:41 pm

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Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face


Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?


So, Miss.Batte are you saying that the History and geography assigments should be my first priorties and that the English essay is not due on the 6th of December??????
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:44 pm

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Ms.Batte wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face



Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?


So, Miss.Batte are you saying that the History and geography assigments should be my first priorties and that the English essay is not due on the 6th of December??????
i hope its not due that day **fingers croosed** so miss
is it?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:29 pm

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Ms.Batte wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face


Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?


So, Miss.Batte are you saying that the History and geography assigments should be my first priorties and that the English essay is not due on the 6th of December??????

The essay is due but I expect many students will hand incomplete work
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:30 pm

alia essam wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Ms.Batte wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face



Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?


So, Miss.Batte are you saying that the History and geography assigments should be my first priorties and that the English essay is not due on the 6th of December??????
i hope its not due that day **fingers croosed** so miss
is it?

Of course it is due, but as I told Mahmoud, I expect many will be incomplete
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:22 pm

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alia essam wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Ms.Batte wrote:
Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:
Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments silent What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face What a Face



Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?


So, Miss.Batte are you saying that the History and geography assigments should be my first priorties and that the English essay is not due on the 6th of December??????
i hope its not due that day **fingers croosed** so miss
is it?

Of course it is due, but as I told Mahmoud, I expect many will be incomplete
miss .. can i make olny 3 paragraphs (body) and points
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:36 pm

It would be unprofessional to write your essay. Follow the descriptions I gave earlier. 1st paragraph is introduction, the body is 3 paragraphs, and a concluding paragraph. Each paragraph should be 4-6 sentences in length.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:01 pm

Ms. Batte
I did some of it
but i still did not finish it
I am so excited to complete it!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:33 pm

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You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

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miss what is thesis?
what is its role?
example plz
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:47 pm

Hi Ms. Batte,

Remember you gave us sheets stapled
together and we solved 2 definitions sheets from it??
shall we continue them or what?!


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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:18 am

i red the WHOLE BOOK ... i looked in summaries ... and i red also again ur summary ... it took me TWO DAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i really worked hard in the Essay ...
P.S :i sent it to you
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:34 am

ill send it to you again
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:24 pm

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ill send it to you again

Received. Corresponding from Internet cafe.
i didnt get it yet ... BUT ... hows it? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:35 am

HI Ms. Batte,

Remember in class the last tuesday before THE INT. tol. DAY??

we solved vocabulary worksheet 1 and vocab worksheet 1 cont.
And it was a Homework to cont. literacy elements worksheet 2
and i fortunately did!!
So shall we cont. solving all sheets or like this i am done

PLEASE reply,
BEST wishes,
farao AHMED farao

P.S.:I miss every1 and cant wait to c every1!!!! yay sunday is soo close !!! afro study king
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PostSubject: hello   Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:28 pm

hello every one i miss you all very much im glad im going to see you all tom. at school.
miss when is the deadline for the essay. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:38 pm

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hello every one i miss you all very much im glad im going to see you all tom. at school.
miss when is the deadline for the essay. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:16 pm

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hello every one i miss you all very much im glad im going to see you all tom. at school.
miss when is the deadline for the essay. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:17 pm

Ahmed Youssuf wrote:
HI Ms. Batte,

Remember in class the last tuesday before THE INT. tol. DAY??

we solved vocabulary worksheet 1 and vocab worksheet 1 cont.
And it was a Homework to cont. literacy elements worksheet 2
and i fortunately did!!
So shall we cont. solving all sheets or like this i am done

PLEASE reply,
BEST wishes,
farao AHMED farao

P.S.:I miss every1 and cant wait to c every1!!!! yay sunday is soo close !!! afro study king

Great! We will be discussing the novel this week.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:42 pm

Miss Batte I e-mailed you my Essay, did you reseve it?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:02 pm

sorry miss but after i read the novel what i will do to make an essay Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:25 pm

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sorry miss but after i read the novel what i will do to make an essay Question Question Question Question Question Question Question Question


Yes, I will review it this evening. Working on setting Term Exams.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:52 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Time Machine Essay   Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:55 pm

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