Dec 17 Proof reading, vocab and analogies

You are welcome

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

You are welcome

umm, mahmoud,
like right now i finished nearly ALL subjects as in revising, but still in one left
and since miss batte wont be on from 2 weeks ago!
so i need ur help
since you write REALLY NICE essay's
and ma sha2 allah you got a TERRIFIC MARK

can you like tell me points about like making nice essay
because i am just working hard and i don't want to loose all of mt hard work
so
hope that u help me
alia

Wow Alia, I still have 4 more subjects to finish, Do you think I will be able to finish these subjects in such a short time?
Anyway, the essay is only worth five marks so no worries.......Anyway each paragrah needs to be between 4 to 6 sentences long. Include an introduction and a concluding paragraph, ( I don't know how many paragraphes we should write). As you might know, your essay should talk about your opinon of the novel, weither The Time Macine is a pessimistic view of human nature or an optimistic one. Yo need to write dowm your answers as facts, rather than saying" I think that The Time Machine is a very nice book," just say " The Time Machine is a nice book."
In paragraph one, you need to discuss how the buildings are ruins. Select quotes from p.27 to support your opinion. In paragraph three, discuss the simplemindendness of the Eloi. Find three quotes on p.23 In paragraph two, discuss how the river Thames is slow. Find a quote in chapter 4. In Paragraph four, describe the brutishness of the Morlochs. Find quotes from the novel. In paragraph five, describe the sun " The ruddiness of the sunset set me thinking of the sunset of mankind." P. 27
Oakly Doakly........

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

Wow Alia, I still have 4 more subjects to finish, Do you think I will be able to finish these subjects in such a short time?
Anyway, the essay is only worth five marks so no worries.......Anyway each paragrah needs to be between 4 to 6 sentences long. Include an introduction and a concluding paragraph, ( I don't know how many paragraphes we should write). As you might know, your essay should talk about your opinon of the novel, weither The Time Macine is a pessimistic view of human nature or an optimistic one. Yo need to write dowm your answers as facts, rather than saying" I think that The Time Machine is a very nice book," just say " The Time Machine is a nice book."
In paragraph one, you need to discuss how the buildings are ruins. Select quotes from p.27 to support your opinion. In paragraph three, discuss the simplemindendness of the Eloi. Find three quotes on p.23 In paragraph two, discuss how the river Thames is slow. Find a quote in chapter 4. In Paragraph four, describe the brutishness of the Morlochs. Find quotes from the novel. In paragraph five, describe the sun " The ruddiness of the sunset set me thinking of the sunset of mankind." P. 27
Oakly Doakly........

mahmoud, YOU SAVED MY LIFE
thank-you so so so much, thank-you
U R A LIFE SAVER
THANKS

You are welcome

and also, like
should i ONLY WRITE ONE EXAMPLE or like 95654695465954969546594654965445 one :p
no, like seriously, how many?

please miss batte can you explain again cuz i cant understand

Mariam, Miss.Batte is away.....all of the teachers are away, none of the teachers are replying, so we will have to wait untill next Sunday

alia essam wrote:

and also, like
should i ONLY WRITE ONE EXAMPLE or like 95654695465954969546594654965445 one :p
no, like seriously, how many?

What do you mean?

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

alia essam wrote:

and also, like
should i ONLY WRITE ONE EXAMPLE or like 95654695465954969546594654965445 one :p
no, like seriously, how many?

What do you mean?

you know, in the essay, they say we get points to prove them, so like, how many points should i write :s

alia essam wrote:

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

alia essam wrote:

and also, like
should i ONLY WRITE ONE EXAMPLE or like 95654695465954969546594654965445 one :p
no, like seriously, how many?

What do you mean?

you know, in the essay, they say we get points to prove them, so like, how many points should i write :s

I don't Know????? Each paragraph should be about four sentences long........You need to prove your point

guys i miss you so much i just wanted to ask are we going to write the homework in the grammar and literacy copy book or on the computer bec. miss batte didn't in which copybook.

hapy new year

no guys the essay should be about five lines maximum.for each paragraph.

It is not a story. Don't worry, I will walk you through the format first English lesson so that you will follow the directions.