Time Machine Essay

yeah i remember now

thnx miss batte

you made the essay more easy for me

thnx

dear miss batte
i completed 100 posts what shall i do

Ms.Batte wrote:

abdelrahamn_amin wrote:

i think guys we should do the essay like talking about all the book like(authors,chapters etc..)
without any questions i think

The topic is posted on the Forum. Here it is again:

Assignment:

Your task is to write an essay on the following topic, or one of your own. If you choose to invent your own topic, make certain to check with me before beginning. Be sure to follow the tips outlined in “Writing in English”: brainstorm, complete the essay organizer, write a first draft, and keep all of your edited work in a separate file.

The late 19th century was a time when many people believed that progress, especially technological progress, could solve many of humanity's seemingly intractable problems, such as disease, hunger, violence, and exploitation. Wells, a devotee of science, seemingly endorses this view at the beginning of The Time Machine, as the Time Traveller, an inventor, creates a machine that travels in the fourth dimension. However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-not.” Using supporting evidence from the novel demonstrate this reality. Be sure to discuss the blurred line between good and evil (the Eloi and the Morlocks) as discussed in class.

Minimum length: 2 pages, single spaced, 11 pt. font. Include a bibliography

Remember to have introductory and concluding paragraphs and follow writing conventions.

ok miss ill try to send it to you

but beware miss ...

S O I HOPE it will be fine

alia essam wrote:

i might have TONS OF problems

Follow the instructions and do the best that you can? Okay?

Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments

Everybody can you please stop posting at midnight? Get some sleep!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, I agree with you, Mahmoud.

what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do you guys post at midnight i didn't know you love posting that much.
but nobody post at midnight.
weirdoooo

abdelrahman_elamawy wrote:

what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do you guys post at midnight i didn't know you love posting that much.
but nobody post at midnight.
weirdoooo

btw .... u r posting in the midnight !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments

Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?

Ms.Batte wrote:

Mahmoud El Kadi wrote:

Miss.Batte Do you think I will be able to finish all of the work? I have been busy for the last couple of days, and I am trying my best to get back on track....................Do you think proper orginaization is the key to finishing my work? I haven't even started with the Humanities or English assigments

Mahmoud. Yes organization is important. Finish the Humanities assignment first! I think many students will not get the essay done. While you are reading the novel, try to get the overall sense of each chapter, don't worry about understanding all the vocabulary.

While you are reading, take notes to demonstrate differences between the Eloi and the Morlocks and the grey area between good and evil?

miss i have a question...

what do you mean by BODY PARAGRAPH#1 , #2 , #3?

AND THE POIINTS

and i need an example ( dont worry i wont copy it ... mabey you can do it on ... cinderella for an example)
BOIDY PARAGRAPH #1
(point)
(point)
(point)

You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

Got it?

Thank you Ms. Batte,
This helped very much I
am relaxed now I was worriying about this
essay from the beggining of the
holiday now it is very easy with these points.

Thank You Again,
Ahmed

THNKS miss

Ahmed Youssuf wrote:

Thank you Ms. Batte,
This helped very much I
am relaxed now I was worriying about this
essay from the beggining of the
holiday now it is very easy with these points.

Thank You Again,
Ahmed

You are welcome Ahmed.

Ms.Batte wrote:

You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

Got it?

well ... im trtying ... what do you mean by:

"bad havenots"
"good haves"

alia essam wrote:

Ms.Batte wrote:

You will have 5 paragraphs. The first is an introduction where you state your thesis (this is listed in the essay question: However, as the story continues, readers see that the protagonist discovers a future in which the only thing that has progressed is humanity's savagery and the widened gap between the “haves” and the “have-nots.”

Paragraph 2. Discuss how the Eloi (we meet them first) represent the "good haves"

Paragraph 3. Discuss how the Morlochs (we meet them later) represent the "bad havenots"

Paragraph 4. Discuss the gray line between good and evil. The Eloi are lazy and don't want to improve their world. They are not all good. The Morlochs use their minds, and team work, they are not all bad.

Paragraph 5: Concluding paragraph where you restate your thesis. Be sure to include H.G. Wells view of the future as a regression rather than progression of the savage nature of mankind.

The bullets {points} are where you write actual quotes from the novel demonstrating, for example, the goodness of the Eloi.

Got it?

well ... im trtying ... what do you mean by:

"bad havenots"
"good haves"

Generally we say "haves" - these are the people who have privilege of education, a good job, family, friends and money.

"have nots" are the poor, the uneducated who often have to resort to crime to survive. During H.G. Wells time, the gap between rich and poor, haves and have nots was great.

Often goodness is associated with having possessions and opportunites and evil associated with those who have nothing and have little opportunity to improve their lives. The Eloi do have some advantages over the Morlochs, while the Morlochs have some advantages over the Eloi. Thus neither one is entirely good or bad. They both possess these qualities. Find evidence in the novel to illustrate this point.

No I am not posting at midnight Alia. I post the moment I wake up which is around 9 O'CLOCK IN THE MORNING